Dear Steve,
I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.
I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.
The English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary , and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan.
Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.
Yours,
Li Yue
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本文要完成的是書信的主要部分，因此不需要注意格式，但是不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。本文要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容完整，詳略得到。介紹的時候，層次清晰，逐一舉例。文章流暢而連貫。有很多關(guān)于詞匯和字典的表述，值得我們積累。
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假設(shè)你是李華，你在報上看到北京電視臺今年七月將舉辦外國人“學(xué)中文，唱中文歌”才藝大賽。你的美國朋友Peter正在北京一所大學(xué)學(xué)中文，你覺得他應(yīng)去試一試。請按以下要點(diǎn)給他寫信告知此事，并表示可以提供幫助。
比賽時間：7 月18日 。報名時間：截止到6月30日。報名地點(diǎn)：北京電視臺
注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3.參考詞匯：才藝大賽—talent show
Dear Peter,
I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
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從整體上說，本文書寫得簡潔明快。語言簡單平實(shí)，要點(diǎn)囊括齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。本文的主要特點(diǎn)是讓步狀語從句的使用，最后兩句話，采用了if引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，結(jié)合將來時使用。
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【試題回放】假設(shè)你是下圖的李華。請根據(jù)圖畫所提供的信息，寫一篇英語作文，描述昨天晚上鄰居看足球賽影響你學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并描寫你隨后與鄰居交涉的過程(如：你向鄰居提出要求，對方向你表示歉意等。)
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)：80—120
2. 可以編寫對話或其它敘述方式描寫你與鄰居的交涉過程
About 9 o'clock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldn't go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.
I knocked at his door and said," Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.'
“Oh, I'm really sorry to have disturbed you. We'll do as you say.” My neighbor said politely.
“Thank you very much..” I said and went back to continue my study.
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這篇文章從整體上來看，內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)齊全。在準(zhǔn)確領(lǐng)悟題意的基礎(chǔ)上，用平實(shí)的語言，將文章娓娓道來，連貫而流暢。句式搭配長短結(jié)合。文章對對話的描寫，很生動，讓人有種身臨其境的感覺。