下面是大學(xué)英語四級(jí)真題作文“誠(chéng)實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠(chéng)實(shí)”的范文以及點(diǎn)評(píng)，備考四級(jí)的同學(xué)們快看過來吧。
Directions: For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 120 words following the outline liven below:
1.當(dāng)前社會(huì)上存在許多不誠(chéng)實(shí)的現(xiàn)象
2.誠(chéng)實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠(chéng)實(shí)
It Pays to Be Honest
Nowadays，we often hear people's complaints about dishonesty. In fact，there are dishonest practices in all walks of life. Take food safety as an example，the past five years has witnessed an average number of 4，320 factories producing contaminated food every year，which seriously harmed people's lives and health.
It pays to be honest because being honest is beneficial to both other people and yourself. To begin with，being honest will make others relieved and devote full efforts to their work and life. In return，it will bring you true friendship and good mood，which promotes your happiness. What’s more, being honest can always bring you more business opportunities. We have heard lots of successful businessmen note that “doing business is actually testing one's moral quality.”
Being honest has become our traditional virtue and we should bear in mind to behave ourselves honestly.(143詞)
“一句話”點(diǎn)評(píng)
第一段的數(shù)據(jù)將吸引閱卷老師的眼球讓其首先關(guān)注，同時(shí)使用了witness, take... as an example.等好詞與短語及producing分詞做后置定語，將形成良好的第一印象。
快捷構(gòu)思
第一段:描述現(xiàn)象，引入該段中，心“當(dāng)前社會(huì)上存在許多不誠(chéng)實(shí)的現(xiàn)象”。而后“一句話”數(shù)例，舉出工廠生產(chǎn)污染食品的例子更加形象地說明社會(huì)上的不誠(chéng)實(shí)。
第二段:開門見山提出該段主題句“誠(chéng)實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠(chéng)實(shí)’，。緊接著列出了make others relieved and devote full efforts to their work and life和bring you more business opportunities支持該主題中心。
第三段:事實(shí)上，原題并沒有第3個(gè)提綱，最后一段可以不寫。但為了使得文章顯得充實(shí)，在末段做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的總結(jié)或號(hào)召是一種值得推薦的寫法。
好詞好句
(1)all walks of life各行各業(yè)
(2) promotes one's happiness增加幸福感
(3) devote full efforts to奉獻(xiàn)全部精力
(4) traditional virtue傳統(tǒng)美德
(5) bear in mind記住(優(yōu)于大家通常會(huì)寫的remember)