求職信要發(fā)揮最大的效果,語氣必須肯定、自信、有創(chuàng)意而不過分夸張,如能事先了解雇主的喜好,或其他人格特點,根據(jù)人以群分的原理,求職信如果能迎合雇主的特點,求職的人一定可以比其他人占上風,獲得面談的機會。
注意下面句子中語氣的不同:
I think that I would make a good ***** for you. 我想我可能成為貴公司的優(yōu)秀員工。
I am confident that my experience and references will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirements of your ***** position. 我相信我的經(jīng)驗和別人對我的推薦可以使您充分了解我符合貴公司*****一職的需要。
I recently completed a course in filing at the ***** School of Business. I am competent not only in installing a filing system that will fulfill the needs of your organization, but I am also well qualified to operate it efficiently. 最近我在***********讀完*******課程,我相信不僅可以設(shè)計一套符合您的要求檔案分類系統(tǒng),而且可以進行有效的操作。
I feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which I completed at the ******** School of Business, I can install and efficiently operate a filing system for your organization. 我相信經(jīng)過我在*******學校的********課程學習之后,我能夠替貴公司設(shè)置并且操作一套檔案分類系統(tǒng)。
第一句顯得語氣太弱,寫信的人有點羞怯的樣子。第二句有特殊風格,第三句則太過自信,第四句,作者在表示謙虛。在實際運用中,如果你不太了解雇主的話,不卑不亢比較好。
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