高考英語文字書面表達講評教案5

高三英語看圖作文講評2   試題：根據(jù)下列六幅圖所反映的內(nèi)容，結(jié)合寫作提示，以“Changes In Our Life”為題寫一篇 120左右的短文 寫作要點提示：過去寄信、聽收音機、住房擁擠 現(xiàn)在打電話、看電視、住房寬敞    設想一下圖中所反映的過去到現(xiàn)在的變化就發(fā)生在你的家里。圖中人物就是你、你的父母。還要講明變化的大體時間（可根據(jù)常識） 一、提煉要點 1、與外界聯(lián)系方式上的變化 過去：父輩寄信與別人聯(lián)系 現(xiàn)在：我們可以在家里打電話與別人聯(lián)系 2、獲取信息方面的變化 過去：父輩聽收音機獲取信息 現(xiàn)在：我們看電視獲取信息 3、居住條件方面的變化 過去：父輩結(jié)婚時住在一間擠滿家具的小房間里 現(xiàn)在：我們已經(jīng)搬進了兩層樓的樓房里了（可以設想） 總結(jié)點題：過去二十年的變化給我們帶來了什么（可以設想） 二、簡要譯出要點 1.In the past my parents got in touch with others by sending letters but now we can get in touch with others over the telephone at home. 2.In the past my parents listened to the radio for news and other information,but now we can get much news and information by watching TV. 3.In the past when my parents got married about twenty years ago,they had to live in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a two-storeyed building with quite a few rooms inside it. 4.In short,changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us a lot of happiness and convenience. 三、增加要點 Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. Another big change is that our housing conditions have been improved 四、修飾成文 Changes In Our Life Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. In the past my parents got in touch with others by sending letters but now we can get in touch with others over the telephone at home.And my parents used to listen to the radio for news and other information,but now we can get much more news and information by watching TV. Another big change is that our housing conditions have been improved. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents had to live in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a two-storeyed building with quite a few rooms inside it. In short,changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us a lot of happiness and convenience.

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