高考英語作文的提分技巧

　　眾所周知，作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡單句會(huì)給人單調(diào)乏味之感，句子與句子之間的關(guān)系也會(huì)顯得松散;而文章中過多地出現(xiàn)復(fù)合句又顯得累贅，讀起來費(fèi)勁。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊，表達(dá)更流暢。

　　1.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡單句

　　寫作時(shí)，我們可以利用非謂語動(dòng)詞將兩個(gè)簡單句轉(zhuǎn)換成較高級(jí)的表達(dá)方式。轉(zhuǎn)換時(shí)可采用三步法。

　　第一步：寫出兩個(gè)簡單句。

　　第二步：讓句②作主句，用非謂語動(dòng)詞改寫句①。

　　第三步：句①表示原因，其中的動(dòng)詞feel與主語I之間為主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作原因狀語，即Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help.

　　【舉一反三】

　�、倭硪环矫�，我將幫著建立英語角，給我們學(xué)生提供一個(gè)練習(xí)英語口語的`平臺(tái)。

　　翻譯：On the other hand，I will help set up an English corner. I will provide us students with a platform to practice our oral English.

　　可用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語將其轉(zhuǎn)換為→On the other hand，I will help set up an English corner，providing us students with a platform to practice our oral English.

　　②這里的人都喜歡湯姆寫的那本小說。

　　翻譯：All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom.

　　可用過去分詞作定語將其轉(zhuǎn)換為→All the people here like the novel written by Tom.

　　2.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句

　　用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句比轉(zhuǎn)換簡單句要容易一些，因?yàn)樾柁D(zhuǎn)換的一般是從句部分，這時(shí)只需要判斷用何種非謂語動(dòng)詞，再把握好時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)即可。

　　第一步：寫出復(fù)合句。

　　例如：

　　After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner.

　　第二步：用非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語代替after引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，practice與we之間為主謂關(guān)系，且表示完成，故用現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式作狀語，即Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner.

　　【舉一反三】

　　①驚詫于他們的熟練程度，我決心要像他們一樣好。

　　翻譯：Because I was amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.

　　用過去分詞作狀語將其轉(zhuǎn)換為→Amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.

　�、诳吹揭惠v車朝她飛馳而來，我伸出手把她拉了回來。

　　翻譯：When I saw a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.

　　用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語將其轉(zhuǎn)換為→Seeing a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.

　�、圻@里曾有一家生產(chǎn)化肥的工廠。它每天釋放出大量有毒氣體，污染環(huán)境。

　　翻譯：There was a factory here，which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，which polluted the environment.

　　將第二個(gè)定語從句轉(zhuǎn)換為現(xiàn)在分詞短語→There was a factory here，which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，polluting the environment.

　　④由于老師的幫助，我的英語進(jìn)步很大。

　　翻譯：Because my teacher helps me，my English has greatly improved.

　　用”with+賓語+現(xiàn)在分詞”的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)將其轉(zhuǎn)換為→With my teacher helping me，my English has greatly improved.

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