GRE英語作文筆記(二)

　　一、寫作步驟：

　　1. skim the question and write the introduction

　　2. input the topic sentence.找出問題所在，一個(gè)問題一句話

　　3. develop the body paragraphs one by one.逐一展開問題段落，按重要性遞減的規(guī)律展開

　　4. conclusion（略）

　　5. checking

　　二、開頭段的寫作：

　　找出原論證的結(jié)論或主張，指出原論證的論據(jù)和假設(shè)，指出原論證的邏輯錯(cuò)誤。

　　忠實(shí)的保留原始信息。用自己的詞保留原始信息。

　　In this argument / analysis, the arguer concludes / claims that...To support / justify the conclusion , the arguer points out / provides the evidence that...and that...In addition , the arguer reasons（推理）that...

　　This argument suffers from several critical fallacies / flaws.

　　三、SURVEY問題：

　　1. vague => misleading （majority, percent, base number, few, many）

　　2. question: what questions will ask in the survey? Loaded questions有誤導(dǎo)性的問題

　　3. Who

　　4. Average平均數(shù)不適合于每個(gè)成員

　　5. Confusing causal relationship with correlation混淆因果關(guān)系與相關(guān)性

　　Every causal relationship implies a correlation, but the statistical correlation does not necessarily implies a causal relation.

　　6. When was the survey conducted?

　　7. Are respondents（授調(diào)查者）being forthright（直率，說真話）? Image men / essence men

　　閃光句型:

　　1. the arguer over simplifies the issue of...

　　2. the arguer unfairly assumes that...

　　3. the arguer fails takesintosaccount other factors that...

　　4. the procedure of the survey might be problematic.