GRE英語(yǔ)考試作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：6分范文的構(gòu)架

　　首先是ISSUE部分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：從最高6到0分。

　　SCORING GUIDE FOR PRESENT YOUR PERSPECTIVE ON AN ISSUE

　　GRE ESSAY SCORING GUIDE: PERSPECTIVE ON AN ISSUE SCORE

　　6 A 6 paper presents a cogent, well-articulated analysis of the complexities of the issue and demonstrates mastery of the elements of effective writing.

　　滿分作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：表現(xiàn)出對(duì)語(yǔ)言的把握(mastery)，對(duì)題目的深刻理解(complexities)，并且cogent。

　　A typical paper in this category

　　--develops a position（看到了嗎，a position，要選取一個(gè)角度）on the issue with insightful reasons and/or persuasive examples （看到OR了嗎，所以沒有例子也可以，如果你可以congent并且給出非常insightful的理由）

　　--sustains a well-focused, well-organized discussion（關(guān)于文章結(jié)構(gòu)的要求）

　　--expresses ideas clearly and precisely

　　--uses language fluently, with varied sentence structure and effective vocabulary （關(guān)于語(yǔ)言的要求的，你對(duì)語(yǔ)言的mastery就應(yīng)該從這幾個(gè)方面體現(xiàn)出來）

　　--demonstrates superior facility with the conventions （grammar, usage, and mechanics） of standard written English but may have minor flaws（這個(gè)minor flaws是建立在不影響理解的基礎(chǔ)之上。）

　　1--Topic: Generalists vs. Specialists

　　Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.

　　"In our time, specialists of all kinds are highly overrated. We need more generalists -- people who can provide broad perspectives."

　　SAMPLE-1 (score:6)

　　In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both positive and negative effects among persons in Western society call for a balance in which there are both specialists and generalists.

　　這一段非常干凈利索的引出來題目的theme: specialist and generalist這個(gè)就是general statement。一些朋友拿文章出來修改的時(shí)候我經(jīng)常發(fā)現(xiàn)沒有一個(gè)引子，一個(gè)general statement。缺少這個(gè)部分的文章是得不到高分的.

　　Specialists ar